2023年6月3日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作小作文：在四个行业的男女雇佣情况范文，供雅思考生参考。
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【图形分类】
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表格
【题目解析】
表格涉及到多种维度的数据对比、变化，需要仔细观察并找到其中的规律；建议按照就业的领域来分组描写。
【写作思路】
开头段：转述题目
主体段：分两个小段落，分别对比就业比例差别较大的制造和教育领域，以及其他领域。
总结：在所统计的4个领域中，制造领域的就业比例有明显的减少，其他领域变化不大，虽然在教育领域中，女性的就业比例明显大于男性。
【参考范文】：
The table illustrates the percentages of male and female employment across four sectors: catering, banking, manufacturing industry, and education, during the years 1986, 1996, and 2006.
Within the manufacturing industry, male employment started at a relatively high level of 32% in 1986 but declined to 21% in 1996 and further dropped to 17% in 2006. Women’s participation in this field was consistently lower than men, with a continuous fall from 18% to 6% during the same period. By contrast, in the education sector, female employment was reported to be significantly higher than male, with figures of 33%, 35%, and 38% for the respective years. Male employment remained relatively low in this area, ranging from 13% to 15% across the three years.
In the catering sector, women consistently represented a slightly higher proportion, maintaining a steady 26% throughout the years, while male employment started at 16% in 1986 and rose marginally to 22% in both 1996 and 2006. For the banking industry, both male and female employment experienced substantial growth. The proportion of men employed in this field rose from 11% in 1986 to 20% in 1996, reaching 21% in 2006. Women"s participation increased by 7% throughout the two decades.
Overall, manufacturing industry saw the greatest decline in employment rates, while women dominated education sector.
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【语言积累】
sector 部门，部分
a relatively high level 一个相对高的水平
a continuous fall 持续的下降
consistently adv. 持续，一直
significantly higher than 比…高很多
for the respective years 在对应的这几年
maintain a steady … throughout the years 在这些年都保持在…(数据)
experienced substantial growth 经历了显著的增长
saw the greatest decline 经历最大的下滑
dominate v. 在…占据主要地位
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